Week of 9/26

This week in class I learned that describing yourself indirectly through your writing makes it a lot stronger and easier to read; it can show the reader and give them an idea about the setting. One question I still have is how do I "show not tell" in my writing. Every time I try to describe myself I feel that I'm just telling the reader about myself rather than showing them who I am. Besides that, I also need to work on condensing my papers. I find myself rambling a lot and my papers are unnecessarily long.